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Re: Baker's Dozen
Animals everyone is afraid of: 1. Rats 2. Snakes 3. Spiders 4. Pitbulls 5. Crocodiles 6. Scorpians 7. Humans 8. Lions 9. Piranas 10. Centipedes 11. Sharks 12. Boa constrictors
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Wacky Accys!
Every Antelope Romps Righteously In New Guinea's Savannas Onomatopoeia
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, you still had that masking tape to bind them up in a makeshift cast until an ambulance arrived.
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Camellias
Beautiful words! Beautiful images! Great piece! Just a couple corrections: 1: As I lay in my field of camellias, I think about the years I wasted. Captivated by your loving ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Him - #1
Yikes! That gave me shivers..... I think you did a really good job of showing us the story, even though it was you telling it to us, you didn't just ...
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: And Then
One of the things I like best about this poem is the rhythm. You kept it the same the whole way through but nothing is forced. And the last stanza ...
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Hey!
Hey! What's parcour? Welcome to YWS! Your book sounds really good, I can't wait to read some of it! Nice to meet you, hope you like it here!
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Howdy
Hi! Nice to meet you! * shakes hand wildly* Interesting name. Does it mean anything? Well, anyway, I suppose I should say 'welcome' and I hope you like it here! ...
Feb 18, 2008 -
Re: Leave Me Alone!
The first verse was fine, but after that you kind of just repeat yourself over and over again. We get the same message from all the other verses and even ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: Linneya's Home
There were a few parts that sounded a little childish, such as "elf-man" and... I can't find the others but there were only a few more. Other than that your ...
Feb 17, 2008 -
Re: One Good that came from Crime
:smt023 :smt023 The title, because it was interesting and I had to read it twice before it really registered, caught my attention at once. I agree that you should take ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Algebra 1
Wow this really helps a lot. I'm starting to remember learning this. Thank you so much. You just completely saved my grade on this 60 problem worksheet.
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Algebra 1
OK, so its algebra one and were factoring expressions. The problem is: 2x squared + 9x + 9 The way we have learned to do this is to make a ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
If you have begun to read this story, and of course at the moment I'm assuming you have, I think the first thing that you should know is that it ...
Feb 13, 2008 -
Re: Holding Out For A Hero Part One
Wow, that was really good. Really, really good. I love your characters! Even the cat seems to have its own really strong personality. I loved the firefighter part! There were ...
Feb 12, 2008
